Jordin is my hero right now, haha. Hilarious :D

That was awesome! Great Job!! :)

Very cute!

Haha I think I'd be too freaked out if some paramedic just randomly made out with me ;)

Considering the premise, this turned out much funnier than I expected (considering she was, I don't know, shot). This was extremely funny and extremely cute and I loved this. Lots and lots of kudos to xoxluurve for adding this to our c2. (:

I like your characters very much, they're so fun! ;)
Seriously! A paramedic that makes out with his helpless patients! My gosh! I'm sure she was a special case but hah.
Very cute story, overall. Neato job!

Ahaha cute storyy!!

ahaha. what a reward. :P i totally agree with her btw. lip rings are sexy as hell.

Interesting concept, characters developed well for the length of the piece, but the delivery was a bit off. Mostly the part where Adam kisses Jordin to distract her... No. Sorry, just no. Lady has a gun shot wound in the clavicle area, right where there are multiple major blood vessels, there is no bloody way the medic would do any of this kiss and drug nonsense. He, and the other paramedics would be too busy giving blood transfusions and compressing the area to play around. Come to think of it, if you got shot in the clavicle you'd probably have a broken collar bone, which in itself would be quite distracting to our heroine. Having broken a bone myself, I assure you that when you're in that degree of pain, sexy attendants are the very last thing on your mind.
And refusing pain meds after having been shot? excuse me? Did I miss something here? The paramedics wouldn't be ** around, they would have just given her a gasmask or a needle, depending on how they were equipped.
And call me crazy, but I doubt you'd meet a working paramedic with a lipring. It's not that I have a problem with body piercing, but there tends to be a dress code with that type of job, so if he was on the clock, the body piercings would be out.
It's a cute idea, but next time a bit more research would be better.
Cheers,
Erisah

omg, if only stuff like this happened in real life, then I'd get myself shot every day. No i'm not suicidal, just wishful.
I can't even describe how glad I am to find a good story with a black lead. For a minute there I was convinced that everybody in the world was white. It's nice to know I'm not the only black girl on the site, I was starting to feel really nerdy.
Great oneshot, loved every moment of this. I think I read another one of your oneshots earlier. You got a talent there, sister, please keep writing.

Okay I'm going to go read more oneshots, just because they're so awesome.

The one and only, Nikki aka productofdreams

funny and original :) great story

hello Cheerio; haven't seen your work in a while, I check in periodically, but it seems you're not going to start Kendra and Deonte's tale back up anytime soon, which makes me sad. But I digress. I must say this was a WONDERFUL and awesomely sarcastic edition to your work :)can't wait to see more of your work; keep writing in that special way that has captured my attention. Keep up the exquisite work hope to drop back in soon
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OMG i love it...:)

That's a wonderful story! Though the chances of that actually happening to anyone are kinda slim. But then again, it can happen right. So why not? Oh, and I really love Jordin's charcter. Adam's a bit of a jerk though, but he's ok. Actuallt, he's prety cool. *snorts* sex maniac. Tee hee.

I want Adam. :P

I really liked your story, but am wondering if she actually did save anyone/ stop a guy from continuing his robbery. Other than that it was great!