almost made me cry with the whole sister-suicide thing.
seems like a good read :3

I like it.. I'm interested to see how she deals with losing her sister (I know what it's like). I guess this is something you already wrote and are now editing.. this is the first I am reading it, looking forward to more.
I love the title too.

Oh, I like it!
Slightly morbid...who am I kidding.
I wouldn't describe this piece as a bucket of sunshine, but it's definitely a bucket full of something interesting! Are you continuing with this story? Wondering, because the date says t'was written a few months ago. I hope you do! I want to find you what happens to Lily. I feel as if I know her-- although I don't, obviously. Like an old friend, you've forgotten about, and bumped into at the supermarket...or something. Lol, sorry I'm a tad weird like that. But yeah- awesome ;)
I'm already a fan.
x reeka

UPDATE!

UPDATE!

aww great start :P

xx

I LOVE IT!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!

i'm thinking you should update this:).

I love the different tone you are using for this story. I've been looking for something unusual in the romance genre, and I think I've found it. Please update!

loved this the first time round, and i'm sure i'll love it just as much now!

I think this has a lot of potential! I would just seperate some of those huge paragraphs, they can be daunting to some readers. Keep it up and update soon :)
Faith

This is really good. This poor girl has been through a lot and I really hope that she'll find someone to help her cope.

Yay! I'm so glad this story is back up. i loved the original version and i'm so excited to read this new one. all of you're stories are so good!

That's so weird that you used both the names Alexis and Connor because that's my name and my brothers name.

Awesome story!!