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| aspirer 2008-06-29 ch 1,  | abuseloved this the first time round, and i'm sure i'll love it just as much now! |
| Faith Adeline 2008-06-17 ch 1, | abuseI think this has a lot of potential! I would just seperate some of those huge paragraphs, they can be daunting to some readers. Keep it up and update soon :) Faith |
| WriterGurl123 2008-06-05 ch 1, | abuseThis is really good. This poor girl has been through a lot and I really hope that she'll find someone to help her cope. |
| GlamourKills 2008-06-03 ch 1, | abuseYay! I'm so glad this story is back up. i loved the original version and i'm so excited to read this new one. all of you're stories are so good! |
| AlexisLovesYou 2008-06-02 ch 1, | abuseThat's so weird that you used both the names Alexis and Connor because that's my name and my brothers name. |
| Black Viper 2008-06-02 ch 1, | abuseAwesome story!! |
| Scars.forever.Scarlet. 2008-06-02 ch 1, | abuseyay yay yay! It's back, its backk :D |
| Esmeralda 2008-06-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseI read the original version and I loved it so I'm more than happy to see that you are re-writing it. Your stories are amazing ( I fell completely in love with Seb, and now I'm desperately waiting for Lucian Boom) so keep on doing your thing , I'm a huge fan. bye Esme p.s: sorry for my mistakes, english is not my native language. |
| Miss Retro 2008-06-01 ch 1, | abuseI didn't read this the first time, but I kinda wish I did. This is only the first chapter and I really like it. Update soon? I want to see where this goes? And how old is her aunt? |
| DuchessYappingDog 2008-06-01 ch 1, | abuseOh!! I'm interested! I haven't read an angsty story in a long time. I used to love them when I read Harry Potter fanfiction. xD I cannot deny that I love to cry for sad stories... well sad love stories (that have a happy ending). Anyways, I didn't read this before you took it off, but I'll be tuning in! :] Good luck with the rewrite. Please do not abandon it. xD Most of the HP fanfics that I used to read... most of the authors have already abandoned ship. It makes me kind of sad. But, yeah, that's irrelevant. Totally not trying to guilt you. Hyuck hyuck hyuck. Well, not really. Hahahhaa. I just have a tendency to ramble on in my reviews... because I don't know really what to say. BUT YEAH! Oh yeah! Also, you began the story/chapter with a little paragraph about Lily. Are we going to see more of that? |
| Jayjack 2008-06-01 ch 1, | abusei like it so far. i don't think i read the old version. well i might have. but oh well update when possible. |
| Redneck-Emo-Country-Girl 2008-06-01 ch 1, | abuseSounds like a good story starting up to me. Can't wait for the update! -Emo |
| Lizeej 2008-06-01 ch 1, anon. | abusei almost wasn't gonna read it. but I'm glad i did. I like it. |
| Oyoa 2008-06-01 ch 1, anon. | abuse(sorry, too lazy to log in) But... I don't recognize this at all! It almost reads like a new story completely... (well, to me anyway. XD) I like it a lot still. ^^ *grins* |
| ridiculouskopec 2008-06-01 ch 1, | abuseI love it! Great establishment of the main charachter, and great details of emotions and situations. I feel like your charachters are really real (haha). Can't wait to read more! You can do it!write write write! |