i can say yea this story was put up a while ago but i jsut HAD to comment...i stumbled upon history notes and the ending shocked me lol and this 1 did 2...amazing story but y always the suprise ending?!?! lol keeps me on my toes tho nice job

I really liked the story, I was so absorbed into what was happening...I forgot the story was ending. Haha. Oh...but it ended kind of abruptly, but I wouldn't have it any other way because obviously it would have dragged on forever otherwise. It was nice hearing it in a different perspective. lol...

that's it?? tsk. good story line but i didn't so satisfying at the end. feel my head is gonna explode and wide the smug mom of hers. hay.. moving on.

this moved kind of fast for me
but i liked this a lot

ah i really like this story. it didn't end the way i expected it to, but if it had then it wouldn't have been as good.

OMG I LOVE THIS CHAPTER.

wow i'm really starting to feel the tension in this. can't wait for the climax.

Hey!

Okey i so totally love this story, i was a bit dissappointed with the ending, i felt like asia should've just told her mom to ** off, but then again.. it isn't really in her character is it? And it was another reason to break it off with Candice..
But still over the phone? :P lol
i guess that scene, i understand, why she did what she did.
But i would've loved to see if anything else happened between alex and asia, also what would happen at school with candice etc etc.. But i guess i just love happy endings ^^'
still though, if i offended you; it wasn't what i meant to do.
Still love the story, that's why i wanted it to be even longer ;P
keep it up.

Indijana

yeah and I agree with another reviewer. such a sudden ending! i just really relaly really want asia to be with someone. a. k, don't get me started. :)

AHH the end? :(:(.. i guess all good things must come to an end somehow, but this was one of my favorite stories i've been following that was being updated rather frequently. pretty bummed out now. i liked the conversation between alex and asia, it seemed real, raw, and i could understand why alex would've resisted from telling asia all of this, scared that she'd lose her too liek she lost the rest of her friends. I guess being the romantic i am i wish someone would've stayed together - i understand it couldn't have happened between asia and candice seeing asia already started to not feel much a few chapters back - but it still seems unfair that the breakup was prompted and pushed by her ** ** mom (by the way this makes me damn scared to come out to my mother too. at least i don't have siblings that can rat me out i guess - but also noone to turn to.)

I was hoping alex/asia would end up together! what with those amazing kisses - but it would've been rushed and probably not a smart idea if they made up, made out, and got together all at once. and i guess it might ruin their friendship - but now they've got this amazing unresolved sexual chemistry! maybe i'd just live off in my own world where one day they get together ;) or you can write a sequel to satisfty that.

but all in all, good job! great improvement from history notes, although both endings left me grumbling a bit. your new story's gona be good so i'll be off to read that. thanks for the fun ride! x

Wowzers! Another kickass chapter. Good job

Wa the end?!?! o_0

Man, you ended the story suddenly again. Lol, guess that's your trademark? Anyway, I enjoyed the story while it lasted. Great story!

Cow. No its not a replacement for some profanity word. But Cow. =_=; thats' the end. Can't you have ONE more PARAGRAPH even? about who Asia is going to be with? HUMM? T-T I hate the fact that what I thought COULD happen, actually DID happen. T-T can't you let them have a HAPPY ending? HUMM? >_

Hey great story! I'm really into it lol. Hope you upload soon!

Props to you!:P