great, try 2 finish this one

good so far. i like your writting style. althogugh that sounds common (as in everyone says that), i mean it.

I LOVE your style of writing! Its awesome-ical!
gonna read more, keep updating.

Ciao!
-nic

wow, this is really good! Like amazingly well written, is this your first story? Morgan Le Fay is one of my favorite figures in mythology. Awesome-ical!
Ciao!
-nicola