awe cute =]

*smiles*

That was very, very sweet. :)

Aww, this is so cute and short! =]
Really short but it's really fun to read for me and it makes me wish something like this happens to me too!

I love stories on how the main girl likes the guy but the guy probably doesn't know it yet he still shows slight affection in those teeny tiny ways that just makes my heart melt so badly!!

AWESOME !! =]

Would be great if there was a prequel or sequel or something.

=]

i liked this story a lot. i only wished it were a little longer. i really like how you didn't put names so this could be anyone. it makes it more interesting and fun to relate to.

Mnaw!

Just so coote XD

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P.S. Sorry you're inbox is completely backlogged with my reviews, I just have a need for R&R'n all your work haha. You're a very talented writer.

-grin- :D heehee, I love how there are no names, and that this pretty much can happen to anyone. Very cute! :)

-toffeecakesxox.

Short and very very sweet!

I loved that so much..really gorgeous.

HOW SWEET. :D I love it!

adorable! i loved it :]

Aww, adorable story. It made me really smile. Nice work. *adds to C2*

Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have a lovely day.

~Twilight Starr~

I like this! Short and sweet. When I read the first line, though, I was thinking "Let me guess... he's going to give her a 20-second hug" and I expected a total cliche. But you know what, after reading it, I liked it anyway because it was written well. And now, the more I think about it... heck, the more I like this 20-second hug idea! He should give her more hugs like this. ;)

Aww... That's so sweet. And so true.

Aww I love this :D Very sweet story :)

ah! so cute.. now i want a twenty second hug.