It is an interesting concept, and I'm interested in seeing where you go with it, but for now I suppose I have to settle for those five paragraphs. Woe is me.

In the first paragraph, the sentence before the last one, "She wanted to be nothing.", I think I see what you were trying to do here, but the way you worded it makes the paragraph feel redundant. Maybe there's a way you could tweak it so the emphasis I'm assuming you were trying for is still there, but the repetitiveness is toned down.

The idea is good though. From the way you've presented it thus far, this may be a very shocking and unexpected story indeed!