Very cute!

Oh, and you really like the name Tristan, don't you?

~Annoyance

Cute story, but I would have liked to see him make up for lost time before she took him back...but that's just my sadistic side speaking.

Great job!

- Rebekah

I really liked this...it was just so sweet. And it's okay to make up words. Artistic freedom! Look at Dr. Seuss, for example. :)

cute story!

-squeal- very cute! super cute! so happy-face-slash-grin worthy! SERIOUSLY, you, girl, have talented oneshot writing skills. they're all so cute and meaningful and brighten up the world a little bit more. :D

-toffeecakesxox. :)

Excellent story, beautifully written :)

It's gorgeous writing, but I'd love to know more (less vagueness). Why did they fall apart? Why does he suddenly want to fix their relationship?
I do still love it (fluff love. (: ), and I'm very glad woodstock1969 added it to our c2. (:

aww this was so cute!! =)

Aw! I loved it! I like the little about how of course she has him as a contact- for emergencies only. right. Loved that ;)Such a cute ending, too! That was great, cause I'm pretty sure that I'm REALLY hoping for my wish to somehow be Mrs. Ben Barnes is gonna come true. :P Anyways, loved it.

I really liked this!
I think the summary's fine, and as for the story, it's brilliant! I liked how you mentioned the butterfly near the end.
Good job!

OMG! that was amazingly good, I wish there was more to it. It was soo sweet... You are such an amazing writer!
cio,
Bellaforever

heh heh heh!
so cheesy, adorable and cute!
great job!