Nice piece about ... life in a small, seaside town?

I love this :) Gorgeous imagery... I like the second verse the best. Flows well and I love the whole feel of it. Great piece. :)

The imagery in this piece really spoke to me. It is simplistic and yet I can see every scene as if it were painted before me. Obviously, I really enjoyed this piece! Great work.

Interesting. Something about the city seemed impersonal, yet threatening and familiar. If that makes any sense. I liked the last few lines. Good job.