Ooh. I like this one. My favorite part is in the first stanza, "Not bird nor bug would interrupt the calm before the storm". It's got good imagery. I can see, in my mind's eye, an oppressively hot mid-summer evening right before the rain comes down. I absolutely love that feeling.

Good job! :)

I really like this, especially the last three lines: "A glow in the distance/serves as a subtle warning/of what is to come." Fabulous.

Exhilarating imagery!