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Reviews For: Solitude

BlackRose6288
2008-06-03
ch 1,
abuseSo far, I like the story. In my opinion, I think that Arianna will probably be asking Ren to get out of the house and/or be asking him what the hell he has done now. But there is also a possibility that the elder, Sarasi, will stall the capital guard, so that Ren and Arianna can run. I don't remember if that was what happened in the older version of "Solitude" and if it was, I'm sorry that i stole that idea. By the way, the older version was too long and somewhat boring. So, I'm happy that you remade it.
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