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Written 2008-11-29 . chapter 15
hey! I havent had any time to read at all this weekend... super busy with thanksgiving stuff :) my family lives too far away to visit, but I went to my aunts' instead, and it was a lot of fun.

I'm sad that this is the end, but you know what they say about all good things...

ok, so... very good. seriously. love the open ended feel to it, even though its quite sad. I like the way we got to see her develop and got to know her.

aww. I'll miss this story. it was beautiful.
faerie-gumdrops 2008-11-10 . chapter 2
'So when I told you I wouldn’t date you because my heart was broken I wasn’t talking about some relationship I had just gotten out of.'

Uck that's sad.

It's true that dying often means cancer, especially in films and books, so it's nice to see a bit of variety!

Also, I love the way that you're telling this through letters. And it sounds so natural! I'm very impressed.
faerie-gumdrops 2008-11-10 . chapter 1
Ooh I like it! Especially the sense of humour... I dunno, it seems very real (eg the ladybird part) and even sadder because of it. Loved the impact of the last line too. Very cool. Nice job!
Written 2008-11-06 . chapter 14
aw, thanks. you're super. ps, saw that you read "away with jenny wren". isn't it COOL? haha. I love that story.

[The weather always affects my mood and winter makes me depressed.]

I do that too!

aww. a lot of these are very sweet. it gives a picture of her and also makes her so easy to relate to. and I hate feet too!
Written 2008-10-06 . chapter 11
I love that she tries to live it up but ends up hiding in the bathroom. tragic!
Written 2008-10-06 . chapter 10
aww. this is so sad! but the end is funny. yes.
Written 2008-10-06 . chapter 9
this is kind of cute. in an adolescent, I'm dying, sort of way.

:(
Written 2008-10-06 . chapter 8
it's interesting. I like when she clarifies that she cant really stop doing well in school since she might live for a while longer.
Written 2008-10-06 . chapter 7
this is so sad :/
Written 2008-10-06 . chapter 6
I have asked my parents to plant a weeping willow in a park and dedicate it to me. dont care what happens to my body. this chapter is really sad. the reason I made those plans was because for a long time, I thought I was going to die about a month ago.
Written 2008-10-06 . chapter 5
I loved this chapter. and also, off topic, I love olives. and trees.
Written 2008-10-06 . chapter 4
the end of this chapter is really touching. with where she asks how she can die if she doesnt have life figured out. aw.
Written 2008-10-06 . chapter 3
aw :( sad. I know what it feels like to be defined by something that you dont want to matter, too.
Written 2008-10-06 . chapter 2
I like this! have you read "james nathan, I have something to say" by DC? it's on my favorites list, I think, but if not, DC is on my favorite author list. it's a quick read, and I think you'd like it.
Written 2008-10-06 . chapter 1
aw wow, this is so cool! I love the idea of letters and stuff, and the beginning was quite funny. there are parts that are funny like that, and like the "noise of the lambs" part, but some of it is bitter sweet as well. I guess anything with the words "closure" ends up seeming bittersweet :)

and its very sad that she's dying.
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