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| Renee Lal Hadar Gowri 2008-06-04 ch 1,  | abuseI'm very sorry. The story sounds so excellent and great with all this fantastic imagery and what not, but I really have no idea what's going on. Is it murder? Sex? I can't tell. I like how you're trying to be mysterious, but it's too vague. On the other hand, it's poetic with plenty of both physical and emotional feeling. It's captivating, both because of the passion and the horror? |