  kris- 2009-04-19 . chapter 1 HOT! |
  Twilight Starr 2008-07-22 . chapter 1The teaser was well written. Nice work. Keep writing!
~Twilight Starr~ |
 teegan 2008-07-15 . chapter 1Brilliant cant wait to see where it goes |
| anon 2008-06-04 . chapter 1 hm. i would like to read more. |
 amateur.author 2008-06-03 . chapter 1Can't wait to see where you're going with this! |
 Dragonette12 2008-06-03 . chapter 1very captivating and passionate! can't wait to see more! |
 Limited Edition 2008-06-03 . chapter 1I think it's brilliant. The only thing that could be worked on is the language...it sounds so...well there is no author's voice and it feels that they're in vaccuum. Otherwise, great job ^^ |
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