Ooh, spooky. I really loved it. Great plot and detail. Nice work.

Have a great day. :)

- KE

Great job at description and at creating a scary tale. Nice work. Keep writing!

Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have a lovely day and a wonderful summer.

Twilight Starr

Nice little horror fic, true devotion I guess. Twisted ending with a smooth devoloping plot. Kind gory though..(Good job!;)).