Blunt, simplistic truth. Very nice.

G-d. The honesty in that is incredible. Just, wow. Speechless.

I really like this. I think that it is so simple and yet, wonderful. I would like to see it expanded out, but I think that the shortness of it gives it more impact.

Lovely as always my friend.

Always,
Lady Alera Van Hexis

So short, and simple, but you hit me hard with this one. Nice work. I also wanted to take the opportunity to thank you for reviewing so much of my work - I'm going to do a better job of returning the favor from now on.

interesting thoughts; maybe you should expand into a whole poem!

This is just amazing! So true and written so clearly. It's simple but also very touching. It's almost stunned me, which happens not very often.

Yes, the very concept itself is true. I've been wondering the same thing. A hospital can do such wonders.

that's an interesting POV. I'll have to tell that to my mom. I'd like it if you add a bit more detail. But, I really think that's an interesting POV.

aw that's sweet, but if you don't have money, doctors don't help you, but there are good doctors too.. well, good poem.