 scarlet stars 2009-03-30 . chapter 1Blunt, simplistic truth. Very nice. |
 Patrick-Henry 2009-01-01 . chapter 1G-d. The honesty in that is incredible. Just, wow. Speechless. |
 Lady Alera Van Hexis 2008-09-05 . chapter 1I really like this. I think that it is so simple and yet, wonderful. I would like to see it expanded out, but I think that the shortness of it gives it more impact.
Lovely as always my friend.
Always,
Lady Alera Van Hexis |
 your scripted romance 2008-07-15 . chapter 1So short, and simple, but you hit me hard with this one. Nice work. I also wanted to take the opportunity to thank you for reviewing so much of my work - I'm going to do a better job of returning the favor from now on. |
 rouquinamour 2008-06-27 . chapter 1interesting thoughts; maybe you should expand into a whole poem! |
 jojoba-music-girl 2008-06-04 . chapter 1This is just amazing! So true and written so clearly. It's simple but also very touching. It's almost stunned me, which happens not very often. |
 Rose Valentine 2008-06-03 . chapter 1Yes, the very concept itself is true. I've been wondering the same thing. A hospital can do such wonders. |
 East-0f-Eden 2008-06-03 . chapter 1that's an interesting POV. I'll have to tell that to my mom. I'd like it if you add a bit more detail. But, I really think that's an interesting POV. |
 kloun mannequin 2008-06-03 . chapter 1aw that's sweet, but if you don't have money, doctors don't help you, but there are good doctors too.. well, good poem. |