Hey,

Awe, this story is really sad! It makes me almost cry and I am the kind of person who never crys so thats saying alot. I just want to hug Eli and Tommy.

Its very well written, not dragging anything out to long or rushing it to much. It also protrays the feelings really well. With all the medical stuff you make the characters seem like they know what there doing without using technical terms that nobody could understand.

This is a really good story, I really like it. The only complaint I have is the slow update speed, but I cant blame you for that. I am usually a slow writer and I imagine it would take alot of time to make the story this well written.

Hoping you will update soon.

-Steph (Word-Painting)

Oh. My. God! I love this story. I remember reviewing for the chapters before this one (or, I hope i reviewed. I definetly remember reading it).

Anyway, It took you ages to update. I know how hard it is to update often, but please try to update a little more often then you have been, I really want to see how this un folds.

Thanks.

Peace, love, typing.

Steph

Hey,

okay, I've read this prologue three more times and the main clue I've found was that he had it since birth and it only made it known 8 months before he died.

My main guesses would be heart problems or cancer?

Please Hurry up with the next chapter, I really need to know what happened!

-Swepah Steph

hey,

This story is so good. Some of it reminds me of my best friend (even though we've never had any of those *moments* and we've only been friends for 4 years) Its so sad because Tommy dies

Okay, I think I know how it happens. Its either a ashma attack or they have a car crash. well thats what I've gathered so far.

Update soon. This story is too good to wait...

-Sewpah Steph