LOL. OMG, I love this. It's definitely the funniest thing I've read all day. I love the adding the IQs together thing. Thanks for making my day.

"Always move towards the light, unless you've been hit by something rather large and heavy." E.B.

That was hilarious! Very creative source of time travel, no big blinking machines or anything, just a lick of the elbow! That was truly amazing! Thanks for making me laugh!

OMG! i just luv the story idea!

Lol...My favorite line : "I WAS THE ONE WHO HURT MY ARM!"

LOL! That was truly awesome! I loved all the jokes and stuff. My only critiques is that I couldn't really see what was happening and also the beginning was kinda long (the first paragraph more than the second). Also, I would suggest that you just read through the story (and also, FP took out your percentage mark). But that was definately a WELL DONE story!

Write on!

ha ha ha the part where you are describing their IQ's is pretty much the way i think of the people in my regular math class :P

Hahaha. This is really funny. Very clever usage of the elbow and sneezing thing. I have definitely tried licking my elbow before. You should do a sequel where they find out about them discovering the truth about the time loop. Well, nice work and I hope you post another story soon!