Fun story! Keep writing, plz.

This is great so far, I hope you update as soon as you can.

So far so good. You've done a good job sucking me into the story.

Nah~ you don't need to improve~ you're so good already!
Please update if you have time!
Narq.

Ohh... I'm soo hooked! I'm going to keep on reading!
Narq.

Wow@ interesting begining, I can't wait to read on!
Narq.

"Literature-based missile" is even better than the plunger weapon last chapter!

As it is 2:00 AM here and I am supposedly in my bed (I am) asleep (I'm not) I had a very tough time controling my laughter at the plunger incident. I should probably sleep, but instead, I'm going to read your story. I now command you to feel special. Feel it! Feel the special!!

Yay, okay this is a great story! I REALLY like it!
Adam is my favorite so far...he's not your typical weak little scared captive. I loved when he threw the book at Troy, in chapter 3...haha, classic!

Will be waiting for an update :))

Just thought i'd leave a review to say i'm really enjoying the story so far. There's a couple of minor typos but appart from that it's all good. I look forward to yuor next update. :)

umm i like the story so far but your foreshadowing is way too obvious to be enjoyed =(

Loved it! Addicting to say the least. And they're so cute :3 the crest idea was a very good one. Waiting for updates! :x

Omg! I want to read more! This story is really good. I was hooked on the first line! *Patiently waits for more*

I think I just found a new favorite story! This is awesome! Off to read more :D

Interesting. I would like to read more.

You have a few spelling mistakes (form instead of from, etc.), but nothing major. I appreciate the lines between scenes, they make it easier to read.

I like Adam's personality and I look forward to seeing Troy get a clue. He just can't seem to understand why Adam needs to be told things.