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Reviews For: Not for Your Eyes

Lusterless Moon
2008-07-03
ch 1,
abuseWOW!!this is briliant...i totally relate. i ABSOLUTELY loved the last two lines, especially the very last one.

"Hate destroys you.

Love makes you destroy yourself."

So true. At least when it applies to me. not the hate of others though...of myself. I LOVED IT!!
kloun doll
2008-06-28
ch 1,
abuselife is full of contradictions, good poem.
Moon's Poetess
2008-06-07
ch 1,
abuseWow, glad you asked me to review this one O.o I like it. It's very interesting, very interesting indeed. On the one hand it's hard to make sense of it, so when I read it trying to understand every single line I find it hard XD I stopped that and let it just flow over me... and t'was cool ^^ Seems I can relate to it. Maybe we think in similar ways, or maybe I misunderstood it, haha.

Beautiful =) The last line... yeah, that's just a summary of everything I've ever known, haha.
Ashelin
2008-06-04
ch 1,
abuseThe last lines were very good. Were they quotes from something or your own? Some of the poem seemed a little chopped up and severe, like after each period there is a huge knife thrown on the table or something that divides it all up. Maybe you were going for that. Good job, I could definately feel the emotion in this.
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