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cheleigh 2009-03-12 . chapter 1
wow, this is exactly what i need to sum up everything. it's all about the fantastical. all i can say now is that your dream is shared. =)
fakiagirl 2008-08-10 . chapter 1
I like how your last line echoes your last but with a little extra something rather than being exactly the same line. :) I really like the concept and how you expressed it, and showed how you express yourself through what you are describing . . . if that makes sense. You "howl [your] heartache to the moon" in the fantasy worlds which you desire, and express the desire through the poem. . . .
Very nice.
Aislingeach 2008-06-04 . chapter 1
Wow. I really like this poem! It really descibes my feelings on fantasy and all that stuff! Great job!
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