 fakiagirl 2008-08-10 . chapter 1I like how your last line echoes your last but with a little extra something rather than being exactly the same line. :) I really like the concept and how you expressed it, and showed how you express yourself through what you are describing . . . if that makes sense. You "howl [your] heartache to the moon" in the fantasy worlds which you desire, and express the desire through the poem. . . .
Very nice. |