Hey! I just wanted to say thank for the review on my story! (Sorry, I'm not on here as much as i should be ;) I like your writing so far! Very good, there aren't a lot of guys on here lol and I just realized that you are the same age as my little brother...yea I really couldn't see him writing ANYTHING like the stuff you've posted! ;) good job, keep writing!
~Marisa Rea

thank you..i spend two months writing that story..anyways thnaks for ur review..i might re-edit everythinbg but that a hassle..and wow u writen alot...

i say YAY! i like this story and i too see a lot of potential in it. please continue. can't wait!