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Der Adler Des Mondes 1/13/13 . chapter 1This sort of reminds me of love, more of a crush! The briefness of the poem in each line seems to correlate to me, to a heart. The ending of the poem on pink seems to finish of a crescendo where the answer will come back down. (I.e another poem maybe?) The briefness while nice, left me wanting more. You really could craft a story within! |
annie 6/5/08 . chapter 1 i'd like to bounce you up and down on my knee baby. ;] |
Sam 6/5/08 . chapter 1 Insightful use of repitition and illiteration. |