yay uppiedates do it again!

i love it and i thank you for your reply i just thought id be random and correct something instead of holding back. one tip? always enjoy writing never give up oh and dont kill anyone if you have stories on a flash drive and it short circuits because you washed and dried it. im just saying it can happen! not that i know... lol

this a review for chap 14 it wouldnt let me repita you forgot one thing for leah shes supposed to be bubbly hyper and a little crazy you turned her dull boring and normal. no offense but it just sorta ruins it she supposed to be out there and gettin samantha in trouble and being right there not running off at the first hint she cant go. i really mean no offense.

finish please i offically love this story

ok I really loved this story so far please get up more of it as soon as possible it is something that has caught my attention and will not let go.

ohemgee!

whoa!

intense!

i dont like Rosemarie though :P

oh :D

hahaha, who's Rosemarie?

xD

i wanna know!

HOLY CRAP!

TWIST IN THE STORY!

HOLY WOW!

OMG, INTENSE!

i loved that ending!

OMG!

okay, breathe. :]

aw, Jared!

bahah! "hi, i'm bob."

xD i busted out laughing.

Interesting!

that... is totally cool.

i want my own amulet now.

xD

but mine would be a diamond :)

hahhaa, very, very cool.

squee!

i love this, dude.

man, so magically awesome, and that last line is like, BAM!

so yeah. :D

dude, i'm hooked.

:)

dude, Leanne!

who are you kidding!

you have writing talent!

:D

must read next chapter.

whoa, intense.

... No freaking way.

So much drama for one whole night.

AND a cliffhanger! Hurry hurry. Write faster!