you know, i bet you if you post a little bit more of the chapters on here. you'll probably get a lot of readers for this story. in turn giving you more reviewers for your site. just a hunch.

i really like this story... i might visit ur forum for the rest of the story sometime :)

omg..he's so mean to her...but when he falls for her..
things are going to turn around hopefully...update soon

Y did you not continue with story - has a great start.
come on now, you can do it.
I dare u. no i dbl dare u

Love this story so far.

I hope that Vaugn gets the girl, yeah i know that Lucien thinks he is in love with her, but...


Please post soon.
Mandy

i like the story, it intrigues me if bleu will survive the year being a maid and at the same time as student...and if she can soften Vaughn a bit all throughout her employment, i'm excited to know if she can make the guy like her. And if her bestfriend Lucien can spill the beans that he loves her.

Yes indeed this is more or less like the Cerulean harbor but i hope it would not end the same like the Cerulean. I want to read a happy ending where nobody is hurt or disappointed on how the relationship goes in the end:-)

Loved the story hope you update soon please ;)

this is actually really good. you seem as if you have a thing for guys who acts like ** but when given the right girl who can deal with their ** can be a complete pushover sort of dog with his tail wagging at the sight of said girl. like derrick. i like vaughn already. nice name by the way.

o..interesting..love these kind of stories...
update soon

i definitely enjoy all of RHunt's stories and this one is no exception. when a character can ** me off like Vaughn does then i know i'm really getting hooked on a story. i encourage everyone to get over to the forum & join in so u can read more of this story.

Just have to say friggin love it. My only problem is its just slightly slow and spastic in the pacing. The characters are developing well although some still seem slightly unrealistic. So to conclude this horribly writen reveiw, I love where this stories going so keepem' coming.