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| WritingInTheSand 2008-08-11 ch 1, | abuse-claps- I love it. Absolutely, one hundred percent, LOVE this. I really think you did a great job with this one. It caught my interest right away and kept it. I don't know anything I'd tell you to change about it! No wonder why it got published! XD It's BRILLIANT! In my opinion, that is! "They blow it away like sea foam off a wave" I must say that this sentence is great. I really like the simile. =D Keep up the great work! ~Jen a.k.a. WritingInTheSand |
| fatbird33 2008-06-08 ch 1, | abuseoo i really liked this. i can't really pinpoint why i liked it so much, i just did. nice work. |
| Qzie 2008-06-07 ch 1, | abuseAw... that was beautiful. Very dream-like and poetic... it's very soothing. Well done. :) Chat later. -Qzie |