 momoxhale 2009-08-27 . chapter 2wow.
haha nick is funny lol XD
so is travis.
on to chap. 2 |
 momoxhale 2009-08-26 . chapter 1wow this seems really interesting. on to chapter 1 >.< woot! ah i also read ur profile. ive read the same books u have. well ive read the black dagger brotherhood series. im on the 6th book. im also reading kiss of midnight by lara adrian. anyway i shall continue to read ur story -thumbs up- |
 Darwin 2009-07-22 . chapter 1A portent of things to come...excellent
Thank you for faving "Rise of the Crimson Death." I'm glad you like what you see enough to add it to your list! |
 sesskagomegirl 2009-07-05 . chapter 2i love this story ever since i began reading it i like it a lot you are a really great author who wrote this very great and wonderful story. |
 Amora Lee 2008-10-22 . chapter 33Hi! I just loved your styory and I was kinda miffed that you only had seven review because this story deserves so much more than that. so. I decided to make an extra long review for you to make up for all of the missing ones. I really liked how you made Lynette be almost like two characters. At first we see this kick-ass vampire girl who isn't afraid of anything, but then when we get more into the story and find out about her past we realise just how vulnerable she really is. I also liked how Nick at first comes across as a 'no nonsense' kind of person, but then as he gets to know Lynette he really lets his guard down. the only thing that I didn't like (and wether or not it was intentional I have no idea) is the i, /i, b, /b. but I noticed that it stopped a few chapters towards the end. anyways, I REALLY hope that you continue writing your stories and if you are interested in getting more review than you have been then I would suggest putting your stories in the Romance category and then say supernatural or fantasy as a side note. people will see that the story is about vampires even though its a romance and then they won't read it if they don't like vampires. Thank you so much for writing these and i really hope that you continue. |
 Heart-of-Black-Ice 2008-07-26 . chapter 21This is so much cooler than Buffy! It has an amazing plot line and there's so much more emotion. I love it! |
 The French Orchid 2008-06-30 . chapter 9pretty sick stuff. |
 The French Orchid 2008-06-30 . chapter 7it is one of the coolest vampire slayer stories i ever read! |
 The French Orchid 2008-06-30 . chapter 1lOVE IT! |
 bela13 2008-06-28 . chapter 21i like your story so far it's difernt |
 Panda Blitz 2008-06-27 . chapter 21Awesome, Update Soon! |
 Alasse Buchanan 2008-06-18 . chapter 10I like your story.
Poor Cole; he was so amazing!
Please update soon.
*Alasse Buchanan |