You honestly make me want to write something crazy and beautiful and real. So thanks. I'm favoriting you now.

;)becky

Aww - I don't know why (I don't even know if you still read your reviews; you did complete it almost a year ago), but this story is one of my favourites. ^_^

It's obvious that you really know your characters, and I love the way there are so many issues incorporated into it - parenting, eating disorders, love, sex, popularity - and your writing style. Skimming over stuff / not going into too much detail keeps the story light, but you still manage to pick out and write about all the important bits in Emory's life. Emory and Steven are lovely characters, and it's just a really nice, 'feel good' story. Short, but fittingly short, if you get what I mean.

So, basically, thanks.

:) :) :)

I like this story. It's got this sweet, simple quirkiness or something to it that makes it likeable. The last chapters seemed a fair bit more fast-paced than the earlier ones, but I really like your writing style.

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Good job! I really like your writing style (if makes me smile). Keep it up!

Tig

Beautiful story. I absolutely loved it.

What a nice chapter. Emory seems a bit insane... But aren't we all when it comes to love? Anyway, I enjoyed reading this story. It presented a lot of issues teenagers go through and how one actually got through them. Good job.

lol. Love the chapter title. This is a very good chapter. About time Emory says something. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Sucks how when she opens up, she's only let down. I like the feel of this chapter even though there are a few grammar errors. I'll keep on reading...

Great chapter. Emory's being a little hypocritical, nay? But she's not running from her problems, she just blocking them out. There are a few grammar and spelling errors, but those can be easily fixed. Sorry I can't write a longer review, but I'm getting tired. Still, I'll read on.

So much apathy in this chapter (see how it's not "emotion"). :D It's still pretty emotional, even though Emory is not. And I like how this read; I can't keep my eyes off the text. Good job!

This chapters proves that sometimes being redundant is good. And I love the end. Pretty sad. Oz seemed like a decent guy (dpesite the fact that he was cheating). There are still those dialogue errors, but I think I told you enough. So, yeah. Great chapter!

I like this chapter. And I hate how Oz tries to avoid the fact that he's cheating by focusing on Emory's eating problem. Not that it isn't bad, but hey, he's just been found making out with his girlfriend's sister. Not cool.

One thing really irked me. “Meet me out back after school.” He growls. Again, comma and lowercase. Another thing, "growls" is not a good dialogue tag. You can put something like "said angrily" but not growl.

Anyway, good chapter.

There were a few grammatical errors I spotted, especially in the beginning, but they can be easily fixed with proof reading. Anyway, this was an overall good chapter. Not much to say since nothing exceptionally interesting happened. I still like the narrator, even though she's probably one of the girls I'd hate in real life.

I like the details in this chapter. I'm guessing her mother's anorexic? And she seems a little messed up, too. No wonder she said those things. And wow, I didn't even realize it was the author's note until I finished the sentence. :D Anywa, I like the emotions you put into this. It's very real and true.

I really like how you used the weight issues in this chapter. Very unique. There were a few problems I have.

"“Sweets.” April’s sweet..." is a bit redundant. Try using other words.

"“Hey, Emory.” He says,". There should be a comma after "Emory" and "He" should be lowercase.

Otherwise, this is a good chapter. Another thing teens can relate to: their weight. And I love the end. Way to tick a guy off.