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Reviews For: Chronicles of a Fifteen Year Old Sex Life

Take It All Back
2008-06-25
ch 1,
:( You made me cry. Good job!
FavoriteIllusion
2008-06-05
ch 1,
I really like this. It's like you put into words what I have been trying to say for months.

My favorite line was "We go on pretending we know nothing of each others struggles. But the truth lies deep within the façades and the smiles we make as we pass."

I also like the metaphor with the flower in the first part.

It kind of sucks to know all of that at fifteen.
HunBun
2008-06-05
ch 1,
This is strangely like my own experience. Mine lasted three years, though. Very well written.
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