Haha so cute!

xx

Oh my GOD. Could the title have been any WORSE? It makes the story sound like some sort of crackfic that's meant to keep the reader in splits, but comes off as being seriously lame. That's not the numero uno reason why I liked this one so much.

I liked Wyatt a lot more than Andy, her attitude got almost unbearable towards the end until she came off as a mockery of "trailer park girl" (thank you, "Wild Things"! I love thy maker!) but her toughness and determination was beautifully inspiring.

I don't really know how to write a coherent review for this one, to convey all I want to say. The realism, Wyatt, the ending (it made me laugh), Mr. C, Wyatt's go-for-it speech to Andy in the end, the shameless deus ex machina— it came together really well. Characterization was amazing; but Bethany was the weak link in the chain: she was way too larger-than-life, too contrived.

That was such a great story! I loved the ending, and I felt like crying tears of joy! You seriously did an amazing job, and I love Wyatt and Andy together. That last sentence seriously was perfect. Amazing job. :)

This chapter was hilarious! I love Beth. She's ah-mazing! :P

AHH! I love this! I can't concentrate on my bio homework!

Yay! A good story, again. I knew you wouldn't dissapoint. Even though the whol;e tutoring business is cliche - and so is the rich boy/ poor girl thing by the way - you wrote it really well.

Loved this story!

I love how you make you're charcters with flaws and I love the unique plots you create.

Keep up with the good work!

xoxo

I love the ending line: it's not too cheesy but just the right amount of emotion to make a great, happy ending without breaking out of Andy's character. Pluse, it was just funny.

Yo.

I just read this (not that you didn't conclude that on your own); and it wasn't like anything I expected.

It was different, funny, entertaining, sugar, spice and everything nice.

I loved Beth, the whole part with her talking to Andy was amusingly arresting.

The ending was charming.

I loved it.

Thanks for sharing.

Awe with a side of some!

Faved!

wow. i can't umm believe she lied to his sister about who she was. umm ok. well i'm on to the next and last chapter.

oh mi gosh, i just realised that this story is also by u! i also like this 1 :D

Ah, that was a good read.

I love your writing style, and it was the best piece I've read in a while!

Adorable! I liked the way you mixed silly romance with gritty realism - I really felt like I could empathize with the characters better than is usually possible with a story so short. In fact, I wish it were a little longer. I was disappointed in the end that we never really got to hear about some of the more interesting details of the characters. Were Wyatt's parents really abusive, for example? And I'd love to know more about Beth and Paula, who seemed too interesting to be afforded so little insight into their personalities.

That was really sweet. I'm in love with them, they're so cute. And harhar about what happened at the liquor store, I actually found that really funny for some reason.

Good job. ]

-dmn.