Ican relate to this. I think a lot of people go through it when they leave childhood and enter adulthood. The world only becomes more confusing as you get older and the more you understand, the less you comprehend. I dig.

Peace, Daze

I like the simplicity of the rhythm, the word-choice, and the line length. This was very short and to the point; a very good read. The strenth in this piece comes mostly from the way that you present something that you believe in that is logically "good" and then something that is logically a contradiction, a paradox--the exact opposite--and finish strongly with "Now there is only gray."

Great piece. Simply marvelous.

-stix-