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| .mate.feed.kill.repeat. 2008-06-05 ch 1,  | abuseI like the simplicity of the rhythm, the word-choice, and the line length. This was very short and to the point; a very good read. The strenth in this piece comes mostly from the way that you present something that you believe in that is logically "good" and then something that is logically a contradiction, a paradox--the exact opposite--and finish strongly with "Now there is only gray." Great piece. Simply marvelous. -stix- |