some of the best poetry is written that way. the words in here are perfect; you couldn't have picked any better. such great images- "rainbow in my eyes," and that one line: "and all I can do is find light and be lulled" are absolute perfection. fantastic song, by the way. nice to see you back.

I have not been on here for a long time, but I was compelled to look back and I noticed you're still posting on FictionPress. I had been wondering how you were doing, since it's been how long...
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The word choice and images here are really amazing. I also like how it looks visually. Nicely done.