Really well-written! :) Thanks for this, I enjoyed reading it.

HAHA I LOVE IT!

Ali
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I must say, your best one shot so far. And being short as it was, it managed to be very detailed, with lots of visual imagery. I'm glad you enjoyed writing it, as I did reading.

yes yes yes! please continue!

Love your work.

This was an incredibly beautiful story. I love the thief and the princess; they mix very well together, his arrogance and her cold demeanor. I love one-shots and you've written some of my favorites. Amazing job :)

I really liked it! Loved how to lyrics worked into it, as well.

Love,
Becca

I loved it! It felt like a little bit Aladdin, at least in my own mind. After reading the lyrics to the song, your story fits perfectly in. AWESOME job.

cute. love it. very...aladdin like.

Very nicely written, you put a lot of effort into the details!

woah. that was actually really good. i've never heard of the song before, but i looked up the lyrics and your story really did go along with the plot. good job!

One of the most beautiful pieces I've ever read. Well done. T w T

Wow, this was a terrific story, and I really, really enjoyed reading it. Your writing flows so well; the story was a smooth and very interesting read all the way through. You're also excellent with spelling and punctuation (with only a bare few minor mistakes), and that's surprisingly rare on this site, which made the story all the better. All in all, one heck of a read, and time well spent. :)

Very, very nice. Thank you.

This was brilliant! And it certainly does have the potential to be continued.