I like you.

When you described it, especially the blind part...that made my stomach churn too.

DAMN! that ending was sad as hell! I'm lucky i didn't cry!

that goes without saying! people get hurt when the chez gets pissy... I should know...-shudders at the thought-

This is a great story. It was i little short but aside from that it was pretty good.

This is really good you were right. I do like this story so far. Its pretty interesting and it is keeping me on my toes. There is one spot were Beaker is explaining his "Coming in to full powers" were you said pretty much the same thing.

YAY! lol I still say there needs to be a sequel

Sounds good. Can't wait for the next chapter.

A cliffhanger...I really like where you are going with this story, the conflicting sides could have endless possibilities. I wonder if Cole will remain human throughout the entire story. Your writing style is very good with few wasted words. I like how the way your characters act is realistic, like they do follow a set of physical laws even if they are different from our own. The only nitpicky thing is that you should probably use a spelling and grammar check. Good work, keep wititng.

-Peace out.

Ooh, this is so well written, I must read more. I am already so curious as to what will happen.

Great story - update soon? x

so if i review 4 more times ull update?

Hey. Sounds like a good chapter. Update soon. I'll be watching for it.

Yes, you put it back up! Manday thats just messed up lol

o...i cant wait to read the next one! :) its really good so far! _ cant wait till you up date! LaterZ!

i love this story chez!