Nicely ironic last line.

The right word is "inedible."

hey! i loved all the detail used to describe the food, and how if you look closely, everything seemes un-etibal. now 4 the hard part(witch isn't realy that hard) the story was good, but remember what Mr.Davi told us at the beggining of the year? "Every story is like a mountin(roller coaster)" rising action, big peak, and falling action.if it's a nano story you don't have time 4 all that, so i just start at "big peak" but it's ur first one and you did great!

congrats!