 SunsetRainbow 2009-10-01 . chapter 1That was so cute :D
Loved it :3 |
 cutepanda 2009-09-06 . chapter 1Aw, so cute...
I was thinking, "idiot, oblivious idiot... so obvious..." hehehe
Honestly! I ADORE YOUR WRITING!
Courtney |
 MysterySilence 2009-09-02 . chapter 1Love it! Sorry, those two words seem to sum it all up. Keep writing! |
 confused.soul28 2009-08-03 . chapter 1Aw this was soo sweet! |
 kenshinlover08@yahoo.com 2009-07-12 . chapter 1 Aw, that's so cute! |
 MiZZ SaHurr 2009-07-06 . chapter 1This was cute:) Very cute:) And I agree, lol, it IS fun to write from the male perspective:D |
 sesskagomegirl 2009-07-06 . chapter 1i like this story a lot and i love it you are a really great author who wrote this really great story. |
 JamieBell 2009-06-29 . chapter 1Refreshing take on the age-old cliche! Not to mention the guy's POV. Doesn't get much better than that! Loved it! :) |
 holly is fainting 2009-06-29 . chapter 1I've had this bookmarked for ages, and I'm so glad I finally read it. It's perfect, sweet, simple fluff. Adorable. I love stories from the male POV too. Great job. |
 ghurl00 2009-06-16 . chapter 1i lavv the oneshot. it's so sweet:) |
 dreamgazer220 2009-06-06 . chapter 1Aww, that was so cute!! I loved it. And I wasn't really sure where it was going, but it was definitely good. And I also love how you didn't use names aside from "Preston", because sometimes names don't really matter. Great job! |
 letyoursoultakeflight 2009-06-01 . chapter 1Love it! Definitely like it from the guys POV :D |
 brown.eyed-kid 2009-05-29 . chapter 1ah, so sweet! xo |
 JustPlainJane 2009-05-20 . chapter 1Wow, that was beautiful :) I loved it!
Very well written. Great job, Mandy :) |
 theaddictedfighter 2009-05-12 . chapter 1Ooh, this was cute. ;)
I don't know... it didn't seem very fluffy, more like a more serious romance but I think that's good to see every once in a while. I like how you progressed the two of them until they meet in the middle - it's quite cute. Most of the lines you use to describe their situation aren't cliche, which is again awesome. I roll my eyes when cliche phrases come out, but I'm being hypocritical because I write cliche phrases too, occasionally. This was sort of different and I didn't LOVE it, with a chocolate cherry on top, but it was good so keep up the nice work. Keep on writing, don't be afraid to let the words flow. ;)
Manda |