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SunsetRainbow 2009-10-01 . chapter 1
That was so cute :D
Loved it :3
cutepanda 2009-09-06 . chapter 1
Aw, so cute...

I was thinking, "idiot, oblivious idiot... so obvious..." hehehe

Honestly! I ADORE YOUR WRITING!

Courtney
MysterySilence 2009-09-02 . chapter 1
Love it! Sorry, those two words seem to sum it all up. Keep writing!
confused.soul28 2009-08-03 . chapter 1
Aw this was soo sweet!
kenshinlover08@yahoo.com 2009-07-12 . chapter 1
Aw, that's so cute!
MiZZ SaHurr 2009-07-06 . chapter 1
This was cute:) Very cute:) And I agree, lol, it IS fun to write from the male perspective:D
sesskagomegirl 2009-07-06 . chapter 1
i like this story a lot and i love it you are a really great author who wrote this really great story.
JamieBell 2009-06-29 . chapter 1
Refreshing take on the age-old cliche! Not to mention the guy's POV. Doesn't get much better than that! Loved it! :)
holly is fainting 2009-06-29 . chapter 1
I've had this bookmarked for ages, and I'm so glad I finally read it. It's perfect, sweet, simple fluff. Adorable. I love stories from the male POV too. Great job.
ghurl00 2009-06-16 . chapter 1
i lavv the oneshot. it's so sweet:)
dreamgazer220 2009-06-06 . chapter 1
Aww, that was so cute!! I loved it. And I wasn't really sure where it was going, but it was definitely good. And I also love how you didn't use names aside from "Preston", because sometimes names don't really matter. Great job!
letyoursoultakeflight 2009-06-01 . chapter 1
Love it! Definitely like it from the guys POV :D
brown.eyed-kid 2009-05-29 . chapter 1
ah, so sweet! xo
JustPlainJane 2009-05-20 . chapter 1
Wow, that was beautiful :) I loved it!
Very well written. Great job, Mandy :)
theaddictedfighter 2009-05-12 . chapter 1
Ooh, this was cute. ;)

I don't know... it didn't seem very fluffy, more like a more serious romance but I think that's good to see every once in a while. I like how you progressed the two of them until they meet in the middle - it's quite cute. Most of the lines you use to describe their situation aren't cliche, which is again awesome. I roll my eyes when cliche phrases come out, but I'm being hypocritical because I write cliche phrases too, occasionally. This was sort of different and I didn't LOVE it, with a chocolate cherry on top, but it was good so keep up the nice work. Keep on writing, don't be afraid to let the words flow. ;)

Manda
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