|Reviews for When She Smiles|
| Hellcat81 5/5/09 . chapter 1
very sweet. i like it how there is no closer description on the characters. :)
| SamB 5/4/09 . chapter 1
this is one of my most favourite one-shots. can i just say? would love it if you wrote more!
| styling16 4/19/09 . chapter 1
| grassong 4/18/09 . chapter 1
this was soo cute!
very fun to read!
i love how you wrote it in a guy's pov
good job! :]
| wolfprint 4/13/09 . chapter 1
that was soo sweet!
| Veronica Kimble 4/13/09 . chapter 1
aw. that was so sweet. XD
| koerle 3/12/09 . chapter 1
This has to be one of the cutest stories I have ever read!
| toffeecakesxox 3/9/09 . chapter 1
:) so cute. i love it. and i honestly love how there're no names except "Preston."
:D at least, i think there are no names . . .
| ukrgrl 2/20/09 . chapter 1
great job here, loved the cute story :)
| camazing 2/19/09 . chapter 1
This was so well written! I'm not usually a fan of present tense, but this is so well done! I'm also not usually a fan of one-shots, but i decided to give it a try, because i LOVE your story "the importance of getting revenge."
anyway, great job!
| RedMae 2/11/09 . chapter 1
That was so
sweet i wanted to cry
i love it
| Maelys 1/26/09 . chapter 1
The male perspective is very interesting.
I'm not sure about the girl feeling, I didn't get how they become friends after the ex-girlfriend leaves.
I liked it anyway (especially the marriage proposal is better than being dumped for another woman line!).
| TouchOfChaos 1/20/09 . chapter 1
| AJ southern 1/18/09 . chapter 1
I’ve got a couple things to say : P
1.)Aw… I really like this oneshot, it was very endearing! Great job.
2.)I found your website while I was reading reviews about Getting Malcolm, and decided I wanted to start reading your stories.
3.)I figured I would give you a link to a story that is kind of similar to Getting Malcolm, It has a similar battle of pride going on and I loved it almost as much as pinkmist’s story /s/2186684/1/ by Nyleve Nalloc.
Just thought I’d share, If you’ve already read the story or read it and don’t like it, sorry for being presumptuous! Alright I’m off to read Once Bitten. Have a great weekend!
| Meow 1/13/09 . chapter 1
xD Its pretty good! You did a great job writing it in a male's point of view.