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You have an amazing use of vocab; and did a very good job capturing the emotive veiw. I really ejoyed it, and thought the point was well put across! Good job.

You live in London don't you? Ah, never mind, you don't need to answer that.

Anyway... the juice... Well, it read more like story narrative than a poem, but it really captured emotion, and there weren't any grammatical errors to speak of. So, I like it.

Ooh and i also love the word 'abyss' ... in general.

:D

An exhilarating read!

I'm back!

Anyway, I really like the figurative language used in this poem. 'A gap of darkness between two spheres of light.' I loved that.

Just wanted to leave my mark and show that I've been here.

Dueces!