Wow, I really like this. I thought the format (REALLY tiny lines and a very long page) would irritate me, but it actually gave a really nice effect and rhythm, like a planned stream of thoughts. Very good descriptions, with very few words.

I had this happen once. It was a dream after all. Very sad, really. :P

this was so sorrowful, loving someone so much and--
the format was a little hard to read
but it definitly worked, and it's pretty.

That wasn't a story.
It was a life changing experience.
WELL DONE!