|Reviews for You fed me|
| 403 Forbidden 5/16/09 . chapter 1
Hmm...this is an interesting way you presented your idea, the metonymy of using the concept of "feeding" lies instead of telling them, and how you took that a step further; I like it.
| kloun mannequin 6/6/08 . chapter 1
it's a sweet way to say goodbye.
| Shasta Valentine 6/6/08 . chapter 1
i would actually even go further and develop this into a larger set forrm of poetry.
but great execution.