Nice, liked it very much. "Imperfect, a mess, amazing ,together" They're gonna be stuck in my head all day! =)

we all are searching for something or someone to inspire us. and at some point of our lives we may sometimes find ourself in the midst of a waveless, windless ocean without any oar or paddle to help us get out of it. we try to row with our hands but almost always nothing happens. so we wait and wait and wait for someone to pass by and take us out of the idleness that we desperately want to escape from.
i know how it is like... to lack inspiration. i also would want to feel like i'm living on the edge... to just let go... to be a mess... to be amazing... together with the one who will inspire me... maybe someday that will happen.
you did well for someone who is still looking for inspiration. who knows what you'll come up with when you're finally inspired?keep on writing.

I really liked the poem! I think if it had good music behind it it could make a good song.

Oh, man, I know the feeling. Not the whole looking for a guy thing, but the sort of begging for love. A bigger problem is when you've met that person and you have no idea what road the both of you are taking or if it's even the same avenue.

Nice. A piece tons of people can relate to. No one likes to be alone with their problems.

Oh I loved that! It sends some sorta feeling when I'm reading it-that sounded corny, ha. But I definitely liked it.
And thanks for your review!

amazing! i love your poem! God puts bad people in your life so when the most amazing person comes along you will appriciate it more fully than you would've if you never met the bad people. always remember that. i live by it, and everything happens for a reason. =)

This was actually really really good baby sister! It's going on my favourites! I love you!