Before I had an account, I would check everyday since the summer to see if you updated. Haha well now I have one. :)

OH MY GOD
PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!
i don't think i will survive if you don't!
this is fantastic, and original and so not cliche that it makes me just ecstatic!
HURY UP! (l)

So far, the story is really great. Loving every part of it. Very entertaining. But I just cannot wait for more!

I love this story..
Full of misteries..
And love all of Honey's antics.. :D
Love Adam but looks like I love Jesse more.. LOL..
Love these supernatural stuffs..
Love that Honey has a special role in their lives (not like some supernatural movie that I've been watched where the girl has nothing to do except being the guy's make-out-buddy.. Haha)
definitely wanna read more..
Update soon! Or I will.. I will.. I will.. -thinking hard-
-someone whispering in my ear-
oh, right! I'll wait! I'll wait until you update it!
-Vena Cava: raised an eyebrow-

I NEED MORE! D:

I knew I shouldn't have started it when I saw it was incomplete but... alas my friend got me to read it. And I'm hooked, hooked baby hooked~ I stayed up way past I should have and I was reading it in class. I even decided to not study for a quiz and read (I needed to know what was going to happen next or I would slowly become a pile of craving goo, BUT no worries I'm not gonna fail... I hope).

I gotta say, Honey and Adam (mainly Honey) have become my favorite characters. Actually to tell the truth I like Jesse too :3 Gotta love those players. Okay maybe I should change all those last two sentences and say that I'm in love with your story in general.

So know, that once you update, I'm going to be one of those people that will gobble up the chapter in 2 seconds flat. Thanks for reading my review~

Btw, I loved the Mr. Bean reference and the part in chapter 7 *looks for it* "God’s gift to the female sex had stripped, witnessed, and touched her washboard. Her jigglies that didn’t quite jiggle…" I literally cried and couldn't breathe because of how much I was laughing. I lol-ed for 2 minutes. Stopped to breathe. Read it again. Lol-ed some more. And... you get my drift xD

OKAY I'M DONE NOW v.v sorry for making it longer. Take care~

Hey man...I know you havent updated in ages.

But i just wanted to say...Dont give Up!

Seriously...If you got his far i am sure you can get a bit further.


Maria

One word : WOW.

What can I say? I love your fic. I must admit, I haven't been this hooked on a fic since I read Maia's Pen's Watch Your Back on FFnet (it's a Pokemon story, if you're curious). Your story... is... wow. I honestly can't find anything to criticize about it (except the update rates--I wish you'd update more often! D:)

I LOVED your Mr. Bean reference! To be perfectly honest, I had no idea what you were talking about when Honey fell into the spotlight, but once Gabe said "Mr. Bean," in chapter 9, I was instantly like "OH!" It's really ironic, because there's a kid in my English class who's practically like, IN LOVE with Mr. Bean XD every time we have a free write he always somehow manages to incorporate Mr. Bean into some maniacal plot (one time it was something with ducks and a weird talking fish LOL)

This chapter--chapter 13--was something I was curious about. The whole thing about Adam's heart not being able to beat reminded me of the original summary for Heart Lotion, when Honey (I think it was Honey; if it's not, then I dunno who it was) told Adam (again, pretty sure, but not sure) that she'd give him her heart; I thought, "Oh my god, what if she meant give it literally? D:" But afterwards I ruled that out, because I found it to be too ridiculous... right?

And--gasp! In chapter 12, when Honey receives the bruises, doesn't that mean that Adam had bruises too? I guessed not, since you didn't really indicate it at all in Chapter 13 (unless I missed something, which is very possible). I was kinda confused when I didn't see him have the bruises, but... -shrug-

Also (god, you must hate me now for leaving such a long review--sorry!), in chapter 9, when Honey put on the lotion (I understood the meaning of Heart Lotion back when Adam unbuttoned her shirt back in chapter... whatever is was XD I felt so proud! Yes, I'm a nerd, sorry) I didn't even realize she put THE lotion until the next chapter n_n;

Er... anyway. I think I'll stop my rant here. I think this is the most I've written for a review... ever. I apologize if this was a total waste of your time n_n;;

But yeah, I really really hope you update soon!

Best regards,

-Mimiali

=] I have to admit this story is very confusing, but in a good way. There's a sense of mystery to each chapter. There were also these moments though when I couldn't control my laughter. You've got all these contrasting genres in the one story and your pulling it off real well. It takes a lot of skill to do that.

Usually it would talk me ages to characters but it didn't take very long this time. I like how you put so much personality into the main characters.

Your plot is so unique. The way you leave subtle hints and clues are so sneaky! By the way, Evelyn is going to have a major role in this story isn't she? You must have introduced her for a reason and then you didn't speak of her anymore. Suspicious, I think so...

Anyway, since I'm supposed to reviewing this chapter, it was great, for lack of a better term. Agh, I'm going to be wondering about what "it" was, until you update next. Hm, anyway, I've been shamelessly side-tracked several times whilst writing this review, so I better stop now until I type something stupid.

I am entralled, enamored, in awe of this wonderful story. The mental rambling, the plot, the characters...

The logistical planning and upbeat dialogue are refreshing and amusing.

Love it!!

I like the story, but I don't know what to said. Its interesting to see and hear what it really is but then again it sound so um...so unreal (if you know what I mean). Honey is an interesting name. I wish her best friend Kayla person could come in soon. Plus, I want each of the guy to have a story of their own with a girl. I would do Gabriel next. What is Steph's power I wonder. Does Honey have any sibling? I hope so, it would be interesting. It would be more twisted if like I don't something else happen **a plot. Its just a suggestion. You don't have to do it. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story for us to read. Hope have you have a great and wonderful day. I can't wait until the next chapter. Maybe Honey is something, hope she have special power, too. Or Adam's old soulmate is haunting Honey. Who knew. Have a death day lol

what?? no! not a cliffhanger!! im so confused!! please update soon so i dont die from the suspense!!
honey is such a weird character, but i still like here! is evelyn going to appear later? she seems important,but how would i know?
love your story!

What. The. Hell.

of all the cliffhangers you could leave, you leave me at this horrible, horrible cliffhanger, you evil author!

but since i'm nice, i'll tell you what tickled me fancy, your writing style. it is just simply; sublimely awesome. i liked how you suddenly went into everyone's heads in this chapter, how you fleshed out each and every character to his deepest core, yet leave us totally unaware of who they really are. you sneak.

what didnt tickle me fancy?

the cliffhanger.

you're evil.

to be honest, i didn't really like Honey at first. she seemed to be the epitome of fictionpress-type heroines. but she grew on me, simply because your writing style is just too awesome.

bwahahaha~ fear this insanley long review as i contemplate weather i should get an account here and fav your story.

i rarely review, but what can i say? you have me hooked and wanting MORE. if my dropping of a review spurs the timeliness of your updates, then by all means, allow me to smother you with them.

i was having an internal struggle with myself before clicking this story. noticing how it wasn't completed, i warned myself to just read the first couple chapters, find it to be bland, and abandon it guilt free for the crime of not being finished. unfortunately, as you can see, that was not the case. before i knew it, i kept clicking for the next chapter, and the next, and the next...

where i am now here, in agony for being stupid enough to devour it through and stuck with the impatience of having to actually WAIT for the next chapters:)

honey is a fun, lovable, and highly relatable girl and you already have me rooting for adam. i suppose everything bad that's about to happen is part of gabe's premonition-poor bloke, having to wrestle with it all beforehand-and that she's going to have to face a lot more than just jealous females (such as myself).

whatever you're doing, vena cava, keep doing it. i know this review screams of SUCK UP, but really, i'm just a sucker for interesting, grammatically correct romance.

:)

seems to me that gabe is the most hardcore dark brroding dark evil one of the five of them. pain is never nice ti endure.

wow. ths is moving from drama to angst. is gabe evil? feeling that he wants to be no 1? and now he needs to remove her to kill adam? hm hm, who is evil? and who is good?