Deep. Very Deep. I appreciate that you make the lanuage simple, but yet complex so people can understand you and how you feel. Awesome

Really good writing. Love it! :)

wow, very deep; this is a recurring idea of yours, isn't it? I really enjoyed the chorus, and the line that "I'm the survivor, you're the victim" - that was very strong :)

This isn't your best work. A bit too repetitive, though in different words. I know you can do better!

Yes, too bad there are people like that who pretend they're our friend yet when they show theoir true colors you'd think they're a total stranger. It's a fact but it hurts.

Wow.

This song just leaves me speechless. I love the powerful chorus and the simplicity of the subject matter. I wish that I knew the sound/type of music that you thought of when you wrote this. Again. Another piece of art that reflects who you really are. Your work truely is effortless. As I have said before. It seems so simple for you to write. Effortless. Like breathing...

I really enjoyed this.

Always,
Alera

well, the chorus is the powerful part, I think it's a cool rhyme, it reminds me of my mother for some reason.

you know you write really powerful stuff.