Reviews for The Antiboyfriend

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whyshouldicare1 2008-06-29 ch 6,	abusei think this is you're best story yet, which is saying something (because you always write amazing stories). i think it's a combination of an interesting plot line with amazing characterization that makes this story so compelling. and you've set the perfect pace. i absolutely adore this story. although, i think Accidentally in Love is still my favorite. haha
Kjersti 2008-06-17 ch 6, anon.	abuseGood chapter. Although I hope Wes'll sort out the Katrina issue soon. It's not good to keep it going when he doesn't feel anything. It'll only cause trouble. Suzie is... strange, to say the least. Makes me want to read "Accidentally in Love: Misunderstood" again just to have some background info on them. Right. Wesley has to pull himself together soon. Seriously. Can't wait to read more, as always! :) Oh, and I'm back in Britain for a holiday! Yay! :D
Faith Adeline 2008-06-15 ch 6,	abuseI like this story, it's got a lot of potential. I don't really like Kat, but I like Jay-Jay, hahaha. And Wes? He's sort of an idiot, but I don't think the story would work if he wasn't, know what I mean? lol. Keep it up and update soon! Faith
Nova Light 2008-06-14 ch 6,	abuseI just came home from work, so forgive all of the mistakes, that will appear from now on. Anyways, then we kinda work in the same industry. I'm a part-time waitress/cocktail server. So definitely not a stranger to the partyscene, and my primary circle of frends consists of bartenders, chefs and waiters. All of them are manwhores, lovely. Or players. I don't know why I just wrote that. I like seing where Wess is headed. Well, good write - no doubt and I really like how you keep focus. Personally, that's been one of my weaknesses in plot- creating. ¨ Fuck my eyes hurt... maybe I should not have been that drunk last night, and then gone to work in morning- and now I'm paying for that. Night.
Lady Macbeth's Murderer 2008-06-14 ch 6,	abuseGod chapter (is there one that isn't?) with good consitent characters and a realt life problem for Wes ( i keep on trying to spell wES with a z cause thats how my frined spells it!) with no real solution. Good memory back to JayJay and can't wait until we can actually meet her. And about the genre- I agree that it is a YA romance, it isn't a romance romance, its more of a real life serious romance. Teehee. ~Lillie
Pione 2008-06-14 ch 6,	abuseThis is really great and well-written. I can't wait to read more of the later chapters. :)
predict.this 2008-06-14 ch 6,	abuseHow do you pronounce Healiya's name? Is it Hey-li-ya?
Joanna 2008-06-14 ch 6, anon.	abuseAhh now i really want the book ! Maybe I can just subtly hint my friends to buy it as a birthday present ... Hehe anyways, Charlie's awesome. And so is Grant :) I'm not really liking Wes right now though. Grr he's being so stupid. And I can't believe I'm saying this but I'm feeling a little sympathy for Katrina .. I mean she's not as annoying as she was in Accidentally In Love anymore . Can't wait for next chapter! I want to see more Jay-Jay :)
Coracao Selvagem 2008-06-13 ch 6,	abuseAnother wild banshee cry of no-ness! Kat! -insert feline cat calls- I didn't like Wes in this chapter. But I had to remind myself that he was trying to cope with Julia and the kids he'd never known he had. But the mention of Kat... -Mwrah!- But I really love where this story is going. It's lovely! And of course I'll continue to give feedback. And I'm glad you've chilled, because, : ) I need your help in revising my story! I wouldn't trade you in for all the money in the world.. wait.. >>;; Hehehe.. Of course I'd split it with you! Continue on love! It's fabulous.
Kjersti 2008-06-12 ch 5, anon.	abuseAww, you're too cute for coffee (uh, wait, what? Coffee?! Maybe if I'd said "too sweet" it would've made more sense... :D). Great chapter. I loved it. And yes, it's very natural for Wes to be mourning Kat. And for them to... well, fall back to old habits, I guess you could say. Poor them... I feel so sorry for them. Charlie rules. Have I told you how much I love her? She's a great character. :) And Wes is great as well - very real. To be honest, all your characters are great. :D Still can't wait to read more! ;)
Joanna 2008-06-11 ch 5, anon.	abuseLUCKY! I've been dying to get that book since forever. Or atleast since a saw it at indigo and realized I didn't have enough money to buy it .. I actually have a lot of nicknames when I think about it .. Jay, JayJay, Jo, Jojo, JL(Joanna-Lynne), Joa and for some reason one of my friends likes pronouncing my name the spanish way. You know where you have to "phlegm" at the letter J. Lol yeah anyways ... Ahh and Kat is baack -_- I guess i was kind of expecting her to come back. I mean you wouldn't have just put her there to kill her off after one chapter. I still don't like her though and the fact that Wes kind of wants her back. Other than that, great chapter ! :P
Lady Macbeth's Murderer 2008-06-11 ch 5,	abuseAw! Thx. ANYWAY, the chapter is really well done. You have really made Wesley's life real and his emotions are, understandidly confused and unhappy. I love the way he is on Auto-piolate most of the time. Well written. And I love all your names. They are AWESOME!! ~Lillie
Jenn 2008-06-11 ch 5, anon.	abusewhhat? Wes can't get back together with Katrina..it's not right! What about Julie?
yv 2008-06-11 ch 5, anon.	abuseyay! i am so glad you started another story.. and found a way to (sort of) bring back jack/kat/liz/suzie because i totally loved loved loved accidentally in love. and i really like the cerebral palsy twist.. it'll make things more interesting (because haven't you ever wondered what a family with such a kid is like?) and i like that you pace yourself. i hate stories with so much potential, only to ruin everything by speeding up everything just to write the juicier parts.
Its.Not.Me.Its.You. 2008-06-10 ch 5,	abusei love the story! i cant wait for more! i hope you update soon! --iflyhugs

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