 kdamu 2009-11-15 . chapter 5gah, just when its getting interesting. updatee?
oh yeah, is finn's hair curly curly or spiral curly or wave curly? |
 lola 2009-10-25 . chapter 5 pokepoke
are you still writing? because i have reading since chapter one and have been checking back pretty regularly. if you would update your bio so we could know whether or not to keep checking back. this story is amazing and hilarious and witty so i would love to see an update! |
 fairies and snapple 2009-09-01 . chapter 5I don't know if you will, but I really, really hope you update this story, because it is really funny. The whole conversation with Mer in the first chapter just had me totally cracking up. |
 Humperdinky 2009-08-31 . chapter 5 Hi. I just wanted to say that this is one of the best stories I've read on FP. You've got me hooked. Griff is such a loveable rogue. I like how insecure he is over the feelings Finn evokes in him. This story is hilariously entertaining, and Finn's innocence is extremely endearing. I'm sure you're really busy at the moment, but please, please, please could you continue writing it? You're very talented. I was gripped from the very first line. Your characters aren't one-dimensional, as you often find on FP. And the banter between Finn and Griff is witty and great fun to read. I hope you are able to find the time to continue with this story, as it would be a shame to leave it unfinished. |
 Reticence 2009-08-18 . chapter 5Argh! I really want more of this. Its a little frustrating to read. Someone just tell her already!
Yeah, but apart from that, I like. ;) |
 who cares 2009-08-11 . chapter 5 just wondering is it Fin/Simon or Fin/Griff ?!?!??! |
 Lady Katreina 2009-08-10 . chapter 5Oh my gosh. I love how oblivious Finn is. Obviously it is what makes her: her, at this point.
Even though it seems as if you're not continuing this story it's pretty good just as it is. |
 samora 2009-07-21 . chapter 5oh god i love this its got the right amount of humour and misunderstanding with a whole bunch of chaos waitng to happen. love it. is joan the friend i wonder?
anyways update soon cant wait to read this it is very funny. |
 Jhaynee 2009-07-19 . chapter 5Please update! This story is very entertaining, witty, has good writing style, and very intriguing! |
 Maggie Balasz 2009-07-18 . chapter 2This is the funniest story I've read in a long time. Keep up the good work! |
 animegirl214 2009-07-16 . chapter 5haha. wow. this is funny. sucha BIG misunderstanding. XD |
 violet 2009-07-10 . chapter 5 wow, it's interesting, though i was a little confused at the start. please continue writing, i really like this story.
:) |
 xanglesxoverxusedx 2009-07-06 . chapter 5I really really like this story. ^_^ I'd like to see more, too... |
 sally 2009-06-30 . chapter 5 best chapter yet! cant wait 4 next 1!
wots with griff? |
 honey splattered brains 2009-06-25 . chapter 5dljflksdfjlksdfjlkdsfj omg griff is so hot |