gah, just when its getting interesting. updatee?

oh yeah, is finn's hair curly curly or spiral curly or wave curly?

pokepoke

are you still writing? because i have reading since chapter one and have been checking back pretty regularly. if you would update your bio so we could know whether or not to keep checking back. this story is amazing and hilarious and witty so i would love to see an update!

I don't know if you will, but I really, really hope you update this story, because it is really funny. The whole conversation with Mer in the first chapter just had me totally cracking up.

Hi. I just wanted to say that this is one of the best stories I've read on FP. You've got me hooked. Griff is such a loveable rogue. I like how insecure he is over the feelings Finn evokes in him. This story is hilariously entertaining, and Finn's innocence is extremely endearing. I'm sure you're really busy at the moment, but please, please, please could you continue writing it? You're very talented. I was gripped from the very first line. Your characters aren't one-dimensional, as you often find on FP. And the banter between Finn and Griff is witty and great fun to read. I hope you are able to find the time to continue with this story, as it would be a shame to leave it unfinished.

Argh! I really want more of this. Its a little frustrating to read. Someone just tell her already!

Yeah, but apart from that, I like. ;)

just wondering is it Fin/Simon or Fin/Griff ?!?!??!

Oh my gosh. I love how oblivious Finn is. Obviously it is what makes her: her, at this point.
Even though it seems as if you're not continuing this story it's pretty good just as it is.

oh god i love this its got the right amount of humour and misunderstanding with a whole bunch of chaos waitng to happen. love it. is joan the friend i wonder?
anyways update soon cant wait to read this it is very funny.

Please update! This story is very entertaining, witty, has good writing style, and very intriguing!

This is the funniest story I've read in a long time. Keep up the good work!

haha. wow. this is funny. sucha BIG misunderstanding. XD

wow, it's interesting, though i was a little confused at the start. please continue writing, i really like this story.
:)

I really really like this story. ^_^ I'd like to see more, too...

best chapter yet! cant wait 4 next 1!
wots with griff?

dljflksdfjlksdfjlkdsfj omg griff is so hot