|Reviews for Inexpressible|
| a silenced revolution 6/9/08 . chapter 1
I love the intensity of the first couple lines. The formatting adds to the impact. Intriguing, emotional piece. Good work.
| Lily von Rider 6/8/08 . chapter 1
This poem is short, but brilliant. I love the structure and choice of words. Although, instead of 'stunning' I'd have used 'amusing', but that's just me. You probably have a reason for that choice of word.