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| Mary Phoenix 2008-06-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was good. I'm interested to see where you take this. I like the sentence about electricity. One thing though, where you say that you get to your knees and bolt, do you mean you get to your feet and bolt? Because that sentence gave me the visual of someone running on their knees. It made me laugh, but I don't think you intended to. It's really lame that I can't reply to your e-mail by just pressing the reply button. So I'll just make it a short reply on here. I agree with everything you said. I think I believe in God. I'd LIKE to believe in God. But I don't think it really matters to God if I do or don't. I'm still trying to make sense of it in my head and in my heart though. That's why I end up writing stuff about it. :) |