very good! i hope you do write a sequal!

The best part is the end: the point is clear without you explicitly stating it. Good job.

BTW, if you don't know, the first sentence came from my nanostory "Within."

Is he going to fall in love with another person? If I can make a suggestion, please add more detail on his own feelings when he killed Sofia. You can ignore my stupid critisim because your story is great I hope you updat soon. :)