Hahahaha... cute, funny, and I must agree: shamefully fluffly. But there's nothing wrong with that, right? (:

I adoree this story. And Aloysius is quite the unique name. It's not a /total/ cliche..With the scenes, at least, but I just totally do adore this story. Hope to see more from you )

i LOVED it! its a def. favorite...

Serindraxx

HOW ARE YOU SO BRILLIANT MY FRIEND.

you make up the rad-est names ever dude.

FLUFF! FLuff fluff fluff fluff! Who doesn't love fluff?)

Danielle)

I think the title is very nice, sweet, magical.

the character names are interesting and cool, I haven't never heard a name "Marcelyn"

aw, the ending is so cute and fun,

idk why evry1 fusses over their story being too fluffy. they know they like it. it was really cute and the gift was uber sweet. hmm for the ending maybe it should end with this line "So it was a cliché. Girl goes to college in a whole different state...Disney movie." and then the song line. idk but def something fluffy, life extreme cuz its cute. great story

This was so adorable and sweet. I really liked it and it had a very good flow.