It happens. I'm looking forward to seeing more from you. Keep writing!

~Twilight Starr~

I like the darkness in him and how you show it. Sorry for taking so long to R&R. Nice work. Have a fantastic day.

~Twilight Starr~

Hey, this a good chapter too. :) Finally got to review...Shame youjust ran out of juice for your character... Oh, well... You deserve a rest too. :)

I can't blame him for walking out. The master sounds very mysterious and intriguing. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

Sorry for the long absence.

I like the insight into his childhood. He certainly had a rough one.

Nice fight scene.

Have a brilliant summer.

~Twilight Starr~

Wow, awesome first chapter! Poor Kyu didn't have it easy when he was young... The poor bugger needs a hug, methinks. :)