._.; weird. I think I read this before. HAHA. Yeah, i did. this same story. but psh. that's irrelevant, since like, I probably read it at like 4AM or something and I was too tired to review or add it to favorites. but I did now.

I really like this story. A lot. Only if it had be more than a single chapter. :D it would've been great =O

anyways! good/great/wonderful story! :D

I'm basically reiterating what the other reviews say when I tell you this, but the positive parents and generally sunny outlook throughout the entire story is very refreshing. Not all parents out there are narrow-minded, lesbian-hating, oblivious sticklers. Also, it's nice to see a good girl-on-girl with minimum "wah! but it's another girl!" angst.

Jonni worried about other, more usual things a teenager would worry about, like "what if she says no?!" It made me smile. :] Good job! And I'm looking forward to your submission in Watermelon Press. :>

I liked it! espcially the parents and stuff...but I liked the girls most.

The genuine emotion and sincerity made me smile.
It was really sweet. I applaud your talent.